1.Ok, Here's the new design. How does it look? Since I have to do a lot of editing in the earlier parts of Memories, this is the best way to keep you up to speed on what I've changed. I hope you like it, since it's been such a bitch to make. If there is a change you think I should make to any Part, report it to the forum (preferably) or me, and I'll make a note of it in one of these boxes.

2. Reporting poorly written dialouge is always a must. If some lines seem out of character, or just dumb, please tell me about it. Suggestions for better lines would be greatly appreciated also. It's

1. The characters reactions to one another don't seem natural. When Kain and Spike fight, someone needs to try and stop it.

2. I need to give Kain a staff. This staff allows him to cast Confusion on the bandits. He also uses it to fight defend against Spike's attacks until it gets the top cut off. For a basic idea of what it might look like, here's a screenshot of one in Hack Sign.

3. Kain needs a better reason to pull out his swords and use them instead of the staff.

1. I think Kain should go with Bruce to the weapon shop to get his staff repaired. He can leave the staff with the owner and go to the inn while Bruce looks through the swords. If this doesnt sound like a good idea, let me know.

2. Azriel kidnapped Henry's little sister to give them added incentive for coming up the mountain.

1. The magic system isn't explained properly. I need to show that Kain can only use elemental magic without the help of his staff. Also that he can use magic without runes, it's just harder.

2. To explain Atma in detail.

3. Bruce needs to set Kain up for the final battle by asking questions about rune magic.

1. The elder will take the men on a tour of the smithies because the women will take a lot longer to put on their outfits, or because he has theirs somewhere else.

3. Instead of leaving Katherine at the inn, she will go with them to find the horses.

3. When they leave the inn, Kain and Nanesse go to pick up the staff. Henry takes Bruce and Spike to get provisions. Katherine takes Gabriella to get the horses.

1. I'm thinking about giving Kain a mini fight after he walks through the door. If not only to warm him up. The question is, what would he fight? Statues could work well, but I can't think of anything. This could be a good time for a Zelda reference.

2. If there are any other traps that you think would be cool, feel free to tell me.

1. I'm not sure I want those names for the demons. They will stay like that until someone gives me a better alternative.

1. To come up with more specifics. Only one of the four puppets has any sort of design planned out right now. They need special features that helps them with fighting and music. ie The bass player has spider-esque legs out its back to help pull the strings, but they are sharp at the ends also.